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i'm
scratch-
ing
and
scream-
ing
and
thrash-
ing
and i
can't
get
out
now.

the
beam
of light
is
falling
down
upon us
and
pulling
us
away.
(and
we can't
even
try to
stop it.)

when
the
white
owls
turn
into
the
dark
shadows
behind
closed
doors
and
scratches
leading
away,
you
know
you're
done
for.

they
don't
exist.
they
don't
exist.
they
don't
exist.
they
don't
exist.

it's
three:
thirty-
three
at
night
and
they
are
coming
again.
they
are
coming.


you
can
never
stop
insanity,
even if
you
wish
with
your
entire
being.
i watched The Fourth Kind
and it freaked me out
beyond all belief.
i was actually kind of
terrified
to write this.

edit: added the 3:33 part.
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:iconcant4gethisvoice:
Cant4getHisVoice Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011
I agree with you completely. By the end of the movie I was crying with fear, like my eyes were watering like crazy. (wasn't sobbing crying btw, just fuzzy nose feeling and watering eyes)
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Renathe-dragonkeeper Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2010
Are you kidding me? (Your poem is really good,btw) but I was actually laughing my ass off during the whole movie,and I found the white owl rather cute
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NightlyLies Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
yeah, i'm not even kidding.
i was scared to walk outside the theatre. d:

and thank you, by the way. (:

:heart:
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Renathe-dragonkeeper Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2010
I didn't got scared by the movie,but something freaky happened to me...
I was in my aunt's house,only the two of us with the two little dogs she has...
The house was completely dark...all windows closed,I went to the kitchen for soda,and there was one window open there...
I heard flapping of wings...I touched my chest,and there was a white feather there...
I just went dashing up the stairs,and forgot the soda :p
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NightlyLies Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
i'd probably lock myself in a closet.
not even kidding. o.o;
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Renathe-dragonkeeper Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
I was so damn freaked out!!! >.<
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seppukuu Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010
just watched it and i gotta say it was kinda disturbing. ima have dreams of owls now. sheez.

nice poetry btw. this kinda style really underlines the emotional content.
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NightlyLies Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
thank you. :heart:

and yeah, that movie freaked me out for hours. ^^;
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:iconmyonlystory:
MyOnlyStory Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2009
is it true the movie was based on a true storie?
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:iconnightlylies:
NightlyLies Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
supposedly.
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:iconmyonlystory:
MyOnlyStory Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2009
i wonder if i beleive that....

i was a creepy movie though
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Figgetywinks Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Just saw this movie today, me and my buddy were totally alone in the theater, and it was near midnight.

Sooo perfect.

This is the first movie in a long long time that actually genuinely scared me, but I loved it so much.

And I love this writing that you've done, so brilliantly worded! c:
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NightlyLies Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
i know. i was freaked out for a few days after even.
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:iconmekamouse:
MekaMouse Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Student Writer
Haven't seen it yet. What's it about?
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:iconnightlylies:
NightlyLies Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
it's a true story about aliens and such.
it's terrifying.
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:iconmekamouse:
MekaMouse Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2009  Student Writer
i'll have to see it (:
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Durathror Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2009
The Sumerian was what got me the most. @_@;

Then the owl's eyes..
And the part where they come through her door. :ohnoes:
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NightlyLies Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
i know! it was terrible.
i just got over it. :O
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:icondurathror:
Durathror Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2009
It's not an owl...
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:iconnightlylies:
NightlyLies Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
don't start me back up again. d:
that was terrible.
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Durathror Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2009
Ahahah~ :XD:
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11BeyondBirthday11 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooooh, Love it! :D *Favorites*
I felt like I was going through what they were when I read this D: Poor, Poor things. TT^TT XD

That movie didn't mess me up until the more I thought about it. The ending was creepy with the little girl and the crying man. (The credits)
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NightlyLies Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
it freaked me out the whole time
because i couldn't stop thinking.

and thank you very much, :heart:!
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11BeyondBirthday11 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Diddo, The power went off last night and when the power came back on, I flipped out thinking it was the aliens and started hypervenalating. XD I'm so tired, But so freaked. XD

No prob! :D
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shedrawsnightmares Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2009
oh wow, i felt kind of like i was going insane reading this

and i know this is random, but how to you make the font change like that?
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NightlyLies Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
to make it look like this, you do < tt > .

and thanks, d:
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shedrawsnightmares Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2009
ok cool thanks,
and no problemo (:
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ephebiphobe Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2009
ha!
I had a feeling that's what it was about after I read about the owl.
Now I /know/ I'm never going to see that movie. ever.
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NightlyLies Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
it was good. just very freaky.
and i'm not even sure if i
believe in that alien stuff
or not. it was so weird.
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Squiblyy Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2011  Student Digital Artist
i saw it in theaters with my mom, sister, and a friend ^^
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ephebiphobe Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2009
that's what bums me out a little.
it looks so good, but I have a problem in the dark, anyway.
night-lights are the most beautiful inventions of man-kind. <3
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NightlyLies Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
yeah, then you definately don't want to see it. i just watched it, and i'm pretty sure i'll have problems going to sleep tonight. d:
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ephebiphobe Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2009
I mean it when I say that night-lights are electric angels. :D
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