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i'm
scratch-
ing
and
scream-
ing
and
thrash-
ing
and i
can't
get
out
now.

the
beam
of light
is
falling
down
upon us
and
pulling
us
away.
(and
we can't
even
try to
stop it.)

when
the
white
owls
turn
into
the
dark
shadows
behind
closed
doors
and
scratches
leading
away,
you
know
you're
done
for.

they
don't
exist.
they
don't
exist.
they
don't
exist.
they
don't
exist.

it's
three:
thirty-
three
at
night
and
they
are
coming
again.
they
are
coming.


you
can
never
stop
insanity,
even if
you
wish
with
your
entire
being.
i watched The Fourth Kind
and it freaked me out
beyond all belief.
i was actually kind of
terrified
to write this.

edit: added the 3:33 part.
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Cant4getHisVoice Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011
I agree with you completely. By the end of the movie I was crying with fear, like my eyes were watering like crazy. (wasn't sobbing crying btw, just fuzzy nose feeling and watering eyes)
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Renathe-dragonkeeper Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2010
Are you kidding me? (Your poem is really good,btw) but I was actually laughing my ass off during the whole movie,and I found the white owl rather cute
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NightlyLies Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
yeah, i'm not even kidding.
i was scared to walk outside the theatre. d:

and thank you, by the way. (:

:heart:
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Renathe-dragonkeeper Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2010
I didn't got scared by the movie,but something freaky happened to me...
I was in my aunt's house,only the two of us with the two little dogs she has...
The house was completely dark...all windows closed,I went to the kitchen for soda,and there was one window open there...
I heard flapping of wings...I touched my chest,and there was a white feather there...
I just went dashing up the stairs,and forgot the soda :p
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NightlyLies Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
i'd probably lock myself in a closet.
not even kidding. o.o;
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Renathe-dragonkeeper Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
I was so damn freaked out!!! >.<
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seppukuu Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010
just watched it and i gotta say it was kinda disturbing. ima have dreams of owls now. sheez.

nice poetry btw. this kinda style really underlines the emotional content.
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NightlyLies Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
thank you. :heart:

and yeah, that movie freaked me out for hours. ^^;
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MyOnlyStory Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2009
is it true the movie was based on a true storie?
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NightlyLies Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
supposedly.
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